I really enjoyed all the feedback. I was a little stuck but new it needed more. I agree the colors were very confusing. I also was not sure how to add in otherS opinion but I like the idea of a conversation between then or an add for a house from them. I also knew I needed more genres but was not sure what to add I love
the idea of more journal entries, the map for the many different places I moved. I also completely agree I left an “end” per say I think it was mostly because I wanted there to be a decision by then. Thank you all for the feedback it really helped.

My blog post is about my twitterive. My twitterive is about my search for a house. This also includes my struggle with all the decisions and  opinions of everyone in our life.


 Thus far I have struggled most with my place. I knew what I wanted to write about it is a struggle I am facing knows and is an everyday
thought. My place is between living on my own and living with my mom. I call it the house hunting stage which describes it well. I was not sure i had enough genres in my twitterive. I also do not feel that all my ideas flow together at all. I feel it is very jumpy but the process of looking for a house is very jumpy from one place to another from one house to another from liking something to hating the same thing. I must say the tweets really helped it helped me
remember exactly what was wrong with certain houses and how they made me feel. Another thing I have put in and taken out a lot is the fact that I moved a lot as a child and I want a house I can raise my kids in so I don’t have to move
them. I feel as if it makes it took long and dose not really relate enough to keep it in there. Not sure though.

1) what is my repitend?


2)Is it to informative?

3) Should I add anything? (Prices, more pictures)


4) Is all the information necessary? If not what should I take out?


5) Is it organized or should I put another page?


6) Is my place well defined enough? And do you agree it is a new house?