Ashley Pfaff- I really like you’re twitterive. It love that you began and ended with a once upon a time. I love all the stuff about god and your creator. I would have liked to maybe see more of how you found out about him cheating or his other life weather you create face dialoged or facebook page. I like the note from your parents and the fact that they support you. The, to do list is a great aspect. All together great job I would like to see more dialog between maybe you and friends or you and him.
Kelly Mclaughlin- I like the idea of the chapters. I would have liked to see more dialogs between you and her, maybe her asking you when you guys are going to read. I would have also liked to see her read which I’m assuming is the video that is a great idea.
Pauline Tazewell- I like the reputed I never gave up. The thank you and forgiveness thing is great. I like the bible verse. I must say god for you not only did you struggle threw it you wanted to help others that is great. Congratulations on your new life of love and happiness May god always keep a smile on your face. I would like to see a conversation between you and your children when explaining why you were
leaving. It may be me because I am engaged to I would love to hear more of the story of your new love and possibly how you got engaged maybe even in dialog.
Lindsay Jones- I really liked the texted and the phone call you your day I would have liked to see the conversation with Monica’s mom if you had one, and the conversation with your mom when you woke up in the middle of the night. I would have also liked to see maybe an apology letter to Monica saying
you feel it is all your faulty and you felt guilty even though it’s not. I would have also liked to see how she ended up maybe more current pictures, if she is all healed that is. I liked the days of recovery good touch.
Kelly Mclaughlin- I like the idea of the chapters. I would have liked to see more dialogs between you and her, maybe her asking you when you guys are going to read. I would have also liked to see her read which I’m assuming is the video that is a great idea.
Pauline Tazewell- I like the reputed I never gave up. The thank you and forgiveness thing is great. I like the bible verse. I must say god for you not only did you struggle threw it you wanted to help others that is great. Congratulations on your new life of love and happiness May god always keep a smile on your face. I would like to see a conversation between you and your children when explaining why you were
leaving. It may be me because I am engaged to I would love to hear more of the story of your new love and possibly how you got engaged maybe even in dialog.
Lindsay Jones- I really liked the texted and the phone call you your day I would have liked to see the conversation with Monica’s mom if you had one, and the conversation with your mom when you woke up in the middle of the night. I would have also liked to see maybe an apology letter to Monica saying
you feel it is all your faulty and you felt guilty even though it’s not. I would have also liked to see how she ended up maybe more current pictures, if she is all healed that is. I liked the days of recovery good touch.
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