Ashley Pfaff- I really like you’re twitterive. It love that you began and ended with a once upon a time. I love all the stuff about god and your creator. I would have liked to maybe see more of how you found out about him cheating or his other life weather you create face dialoged or facebook page. I like the note from your parents and the fact that they support you. The, to do list is a great aspect. All together great job I would like to see more dialog between maybe you and friends or you and him.


Kelly Mclaughlin- I like the idea of the chapters. I would have liked to see more dialogs between you and her, maybe her asking you when you guys are going to read. I would have also liked to see her read which I’m assuming is the video that is a great idea.  


Pauline Tazewell- I like the reputed I never gave up. The thank you and forgiveness thing is great. I like the bible verse. I must say god for you not only did you struggle threw it you wanted to help others that is great. Congratulations on your new life of love and happiness May god always keep a smile on your face.  I would like to see a conversation between you and your children when explaining why you were
  leaving. It may be me because I am engaged to I would love to hear more of the story of your new love and possibly how you got engaged maybe even in dialog. 
  


Lindsay Jones- I really liked the texted and the phone call you your day I would have liked to see the conversation with Monica’s mom if you had one, and the conversation with your mom when you woke up in the middle of the night. I would have also liked to see maybe an apology letter to Monica saying
  you feel it is all your faulty and you felt guilty even though it’s not. I would have also liked to see how she ended up maybe more current pictures, if she is all healed that is. I liked the days of recovery good touch. 

I really enjoyed all the feedback. I was a little stuck but new it needed more. I agree the colors were very confusing. I also was not sure how to add in otherS opinion but I like the idea of a conversation between then or an add for a house from them. I also knew I needed more genres but was not sure what to add I love
the idea of more journal entries, the map for the many different places I moved. I also completely agree I left an “end” per say I think it was mostly because I wanted there to be a decision by then. Thank you all for the feedback it really helped.

Today we went through some very emotional twitterives it really made me think about how not so personal mine is and have I decided to not go that way with mine it kind of made me second guess my decision.


Stephanie Bowser- I loved that fact that dance was your way to feel free very touching to me. It really hit home I used to dance to get away
from my struggle with dyslexia. I really love the video which I’m sure was very hard to film. I think the adding of more quotes would benefit your twitterive. I think a video of you dancing and seeing how free you are when you dance and how you really feel the music will truly send you’re twitterive over the top.



Daren Gaunt- I like the mirror picture with the child. The video with the children point of view was a great idea and made me remember back to not being able to open doors. I would add more adult aspects even go as far as putting the reality to what you did as a child compared to know with the videos of and adult perspective and the same questions and a schedule.


David Lucus- Your twitterive was truly moving just the fact that you are a strong enough person to educate everyone and adding human is amazing to me. I love the prezi it is a great fun way to add in all the facts and information. I would love to see more of the flashlight in the dark to give you medicine it would be a fun. It would bring a more realistic aspect to what your
mom did other than just the pictures of all the medicine.


Katie Collins- This really hits home with me I have alcoholism in my family as well. This is the true road trip and the twist turns and forks in  the road of your life. I like the separation but instead of lines I would like to see a road. I would like to know more about your mom and your sister did you guys comfort each other or keep to your selves. You may want to do these by conversations you guys have had.

I was very nervous using weebly I had never used or created a cite  before and I thought it would be extremely complicated. I learned last semester  how to blog and tweet so that was little to no problem. Weebly is very user  friendly and easy to use. I was not sure what to add into my twitterive at first  but after researching different genera’s I decided to add something’s into my  twitterive that I did not think of in the beginning.  I added  pictures, quotes and a wordle. I was not sure how to use wordle and first I  created one and then decided it would fit pretty well into my twitterive so I  added it in. I struggled to add it at first but after coming to Professor  Mangini I figured it out and was able to include it in my twittrerive. I have  gained the ability to try new technologies and feel more comfortable with trying  new technologies. I have not gained the understanding of the many genera’s out  there, I would like to learn and create more genera’s but one new technology at  a time for me. I am still trying to perfect all the things with weebly.

I really liked the twitterives we went over in class. They gave me ideas for mine and I really liked to see how others did things.



Alissa francisco- I really enjoyed seeing how her soft ball carrier ended and the emotional factors that went along with the quitting of her dream. I thought she should add dialoged when talking to the instructions and possibly dreams from when she was little about wanting to be a softball player in college. All together I liked how it flowed.


David Reyes- I really enjoyed the idea of this twitterive it needs a little more organization but I think it will be great.


Christie Johnson- I really enjoyed this twitterive I related alot to it. I think if you added dialogue with the speech her grandfather made even if it is shortened and made up it will add an emotional aspect that is not there completely.


Rebecca Crawford- I love the past present and future. If you just define them in the house the wedding and your 21st birthday it will be perfect. You have a lot of good things in there I love the timer idea. 

1) Who are the characters in your story?


The main characters are me and my fiancé Carl. Other characters who are involved are my mother Lisa, his father Cl, his mother Diane, his
sister Jessica, and the modular guy bill.


2)What is your story? What genres/modes are you using for your  story?


My story is my struggle to find a home I don’t want just a house. I use a diary entry, pictures, wordle, and spacing and colors to create drama
and relationships.


3) When does your story take place?


It takes place know and continues to take place we are still waiting on some answers for this to be complete.


4) Where is your place?


The search for a home where we can live happily ever after.



5) Why do you feel a connection/lack of connection to your place?


I want to feel a strong connection to my place I feel strongly about finding my place because I always had a house as a child not a home and I
want to find somewhere I can call home.


6) How do you show your audience your connection/ lack of connection?


I show a diary entry from when I was a child and I walk thru exactly what I am looking for.


 



I really liked going thru my twitterive with others they gave my ideas such as how to add in my child hood moving experience without making it
the center of attention. They all so gave me the idea to make my obstacle and others opinions in bold and red so they stick out like a stop sign. Also threw looking at others twitterive’s I decided to add a few quotes.

My blog post is about my twitterive. My twitterive is about my search for a house. This also includes my struggle with all the decisions and  opinions of everyone in our life.


 Thus far I have struggled most with my place. I knew what I wanted to write about it is a struggle I am facing knows and is an everyday
thought. My place is between living on my own and living with my mom. I call it the house hunting stage which describes it well. I was not sure i had enough genres in my twitterive. I also do not feel that all my ideas flow together at all. I feel it is very jumpy but the process of looking for a house is very jumpy from one place to another from one house to another from liking something to hating the same thing. I must say the tweets really helped it helped me
remember exactly what was wrong with certain houses and how they made me feel. Another thing I have put in and taken out a lot is the fact that I moved a lot as a child and I want a house I can raise my kids in so I don’t have to move
them. I feel as if it makes it took long and dose not really relate enough to keep it in there. Not sure though.

1) what is my repitend?


2)Is it to informative?

3) Should I add anything? (Prices, more pictures)


4) Is all the information necessary? If not what should I take out?


5) Is it organized or should I put another page?


6) Is my place well defined enough? And do you agree it is a new house?

As I was walked down the aisle by the usher I was sat down in
the front. I think to myself while sitting there why am I in the front row at
this wedding for someone I don’t even know?  I am surrounded by people that I do not
know. All of the sudden the music plays and every one stands: Here come the
bride all dressed in white plays threw the church.

A woman and my son walk down the aisle. I wispier to the person  next to me “who is that?” as they remind me “she is your granddaughter.” I do  not remember her but I do remember my wedding day clearly. I really loved my  beautiful dress and flowers with the huge bow and veil on my head my day of true  happiness.

As the Officiate starts the wedding I listened it sounded so  lovely these to people stared into each other’s eyes. Bo I wish I could remember
her.  

I start to drift back to my wedding and emember back to when me  and my husband said I do and I scream out “I do”

 


Everyone at the wedding is looking at me as a realized this is  not my wedding and it was all a flash back I cry in my seat remembering my husband is dead and I am watching my granddaughter who I cannot remember is getting married.

At this moment I realized I do remember her running around with  my husband was he was still alive. I waited till the end of the wedding and  hugged my son and my granddaughter Michelle which for that moment in time I
remembered.  It felt amazing and  warm to feel the love of the family I could barely remember.

Waiting for a place we can call
home

My dream house is not the same as his
dream house

Why? Are the pictures always better then
the reality? Disappointment

The right house is soon to come I’m
still looking up

 Class all day. While they look at houses 

They found a house can it be
true

 Just put a bid in on our dream
house

 Butterflies are flying



 

Tweets used:
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waiting to find a place we
can call home... finding the perfect house is imposible #twitterive


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My dream house: 3 bedrooms
3.5 bathrooms big kitchen open floor plan. His dream house: garage and yard...
sounds simple so not #twitterive


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One foot in the door and
disappointed already #twitterive #newplace


·        
Why are, the pictures always
better then the reality #twitterive


·        
Kitchen is smaller then it
looked in picture... dining room in carpet a no no #twitterive


·        
We heard back already. we are
up against another bid so we eather go in to a bidding war or we get the house
or they counter offer #twiterive


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This is not the house
maybe we will find one Monday... still looking up #twitterive


·        
Just put a bid in on a house
my fingers will be crossed for a few days :-/ butterflies are flying in my belly
#twitterive


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Class all day.. while mom and carl look at houses and land...
hope they find something good that is worth a look again tomorrow #twitterive



·        
They found a house :-) the
one I liked.... can it be true... we will see tomorrow #twitterive